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Well done @chryzcodez nice job. Here is a quick review:
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There are some few issues with consistency in write up tone and text format e.g. ending some questions with a full stop, typographical errors (e.g. 'organizationations'), the tone also sounds like you came up with the whole write up out of the top of your head etc.
For the tone, I recommend you liaise with VMS department, their write ups will help you word the introductory parts of this doc properly. -
Under the heading 'zurichat plugins', seems like you've mixed up a few things:
- Zuri main, Zuri API, Zuri desktop and mobile are not plugins
- Replace this heading with a more appropriate one that encapsulates all the functionalities
- Zuri main and API can be categorized as 'ZuriChat Control' under the new heading, while the desktop and mobile categorized as 'ZuriChat Apps', and the plugins as 'ZuriChat Plugins'
- Also the bulleting format is inconsistent and one can hardly differentiate a subheading from a bullet point under some of the plugins
Please kindly make changes and update accordingly.
Thanks and kind regards.
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