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some suggestions about refactoring code, consider consolidating variables.
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Use proper python formatting for comments with either ''' or #
| //Loop back to this point once code finishes | ||
| loop = 1 | ||
| while (loop < 9): | ||
| // All the questions that the program asks the user |
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see comment about creating a function (either dict or array to access variables)
| place = input("Name a place: ") | ||
| adjective = input("Choose an adjective (Describing word): ") | ||
| third_noun = input("Choose a noun: ") | ||
| // Displays the story based on the users input |
| print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Well it is.") | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| // Loop back to "loop = 1" |
| // Displays the story based on the users input | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") |
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seond_noun typo! reads as undefined / runs error
| #Mad Libs Generator Project | ||
| //Loop back to this point once code finishes | ||
| loop = 1 | ||
| while (loop < 9): |
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current while loop will generate the program 8 times (loop could start at 0, while loop < 10)
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Consider creating a dictionary of inputs/print statements for your formatting. Potentially consider creating a function for better readability/manipulation of code.
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