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@jacobgkau jacobgkau requested a review from a team December 29, 2025 17:30
@jacobgkau jacobgkau force-pushed the add-initial-setup-walkthrough branch from 7a4ddf5 to 340e689 Compare December 29, 2025 17:32
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I started writing out a review, but I went ahead and just made the edits instead, since it was all fairly objective. Changes include:

  • Calling it "COSMIC Greeter" rather than "COSMIC-greeter".
  • Correcting the heading levels for the image labels.
  • Minor grammatical tweaks like adding Oxford commas in list sentences.
  • Making the syntax within the image descriptions a little more consistent, and moving some additional info from the image descriptions into the normal text.

It's my opinion that the initial setup wizard is straightforward enough to be self-documenting, but I don't have a problem with adding this section to the article.

@jacobgkau jacobgkau requested a review from a team December 29, 2025 17:36
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I think it'd be a good idea to add a few instructions on how to update your system either via COSMIC Store or the Terminal at the end since updating your fresh installed OS usually is one of the first things you'll do after doing a new install of your OS.

Aside from that, I think it looks overall good.

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Nice addition to show the initial setup of the system after the install. All of the images look good and I see no odd formatting while running this in NPM.

@thomas-zimmerman thomas-zimmerman merged commit 17305d5 into master Dec 29, 2025
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@thomas-zimmerman thomas-zimmerman deleted the add-initial-setup-walkthrough branch December 29, 2025 20:39
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