Create EditedMethodology.txt

[icebert04]

I've finished polishing chapter 2.2 of the white paper.
During the course of this action, I noticed that there are a few mistakes and flaws that needed to be edited, improved, and corrected.

The errors that I've corrected are...

1.) Sentence fragments = incomplete sentences that are missing either a noun or an object of a verb.

2.) Choice of better words = I change a few words that go well with the sentences.

3.) Redundant writing = I've omitted a few words for the readers not to be distracted nor annoyed due to unnecessary length to one's writing.

4.) Punctuation clusters = I have edited a few periods, comma, colons, that are either out of line or out of place.

5.) Overly Long Sentences = I cut 1 long sentence to improve clarity and comprehensibility. Long sentences are often discouraged. And never-ending sentences not only make the writing dull but can lead to more grammar mistakes.

Hope this helps your White Paper project.

If you need me to polish the other documents in native English... feel free to message me anytime.