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SAPPub.Web/Views/SecondarySchool/AcademicPerformanceAttainmentAndProgress.cshtml

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         <h3 class="govuk-heading-m">Attainment 8</h3>
 
         <p class="govuk-body">
-            Attainment 8 is used to assess a pupil’s average achievement across their best performing 8 subjects.
+            Attainment 8 is used to assess a pupil’s average achievement across their 8 best GCSE-level subjects.
         </p>
 
         <govuk-details id="details-attainment8">
@@ -70,10 +70,10 @@
                         English and maths, which are both double-weighted
                     </li>
                     <li>
-                        EBacc subjects are a group of GCSE subjects, including sciences, geography, history and languages, that help students gain a broad set of knowledge and skills.                        
+                        other subjects including sciences, geography, history and languages                     
                     </li>
                     <li>
-                        open group which includes any other approved GCSEs or vocational qualifications
+                        any other approved GCSEs or vocational qualifications
                     </li>
                 </ul>
 
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@
                 <div class="info__icon"></div>
                 <div class="custom-card__content">
                     <p class="govuk-body">
-                There are no Progress 8 scores for the academic years 2024 to 2025 and 2025 to 2026 as there is no KS2 assessment data available due to the disruption of COVID-19.
+                There are no Progress 8 scores available for the academic years 2024 to 2025 and 2025 to 2026. This is because there is no KS2 baseline available to calculate secondary progress measures for these years due to COVID-19 disruption.
                     </p>
                 </div>
             </div>

SAPPub.Web/Views/SecondarySchool/AcademicPerformanceSubjectsEntered.cshtml

@@ -49,8 +49,7 @@
             </govuk-details-summary>
             <govuk-details-text>
                 <p>A GCSE is an academic qualification awarded for exams in England, usually taken at the age of 16.</p>
-                <p>Technical Awards, such as BTECs, are work-related qualifications in areas like travel and tourism or animal care.</p>
-                <p>If the qualification offered is not applicable, it means that pupils will study this subject but will not gain a qualification.</p>
+                <p>Technical Awards are vocational qualifications which focus on broad job areas, like health and social care or travel and tourism. Pupils can take Technical Awards alongside GCSEs.</p>
             </govuk-details-text>
         </govuk-details>
 

SAPPub.Web/Views/SecondarySchool/Admissions.cshtml

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                            target="_blank"
                            rel="noopener noreferrer"
                            class="govuk-link">
-                            Find out more about school admission criteria.
+                            Find out more about school admission criteria
                             <span class="govuk-visually-hidden">(opens in a new tab)</span>
                         </a>
                     </p>

SAPPub.Web/Views/SecondarySchool/CurriculumAndExtraCurricularActivities.cshtml

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                         Most schools offer a range of activities that are linked to, or work in addition to, the curriculum.
                     </p>
                     <p class="govuk-body">
-                        The range of activities can vary due to staff availability, time of year and funding.
+                        The range of activities can vary due to staff availability, time of year and funding availability.
                     </p>
                 </div>
                 <govuk-summary-list>