diff --git a/draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment.xml b/draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment.xml
index df68b1b..6d4fa78 100644
--- a/draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment.xml
+++ b/draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment.xml
@@ -158,8 +158,8 @@
This document describes when and how an operator uses the technique of
- Mapping of Address and Port (MAP) for the IPv4 residual
- deployment in the IPv6-dominant domain.
+ Mapping of Address and Port (MAP) for IPv4 residual
+ deployment in an IPv6-dominant domain.
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
IPv4 address exhaustion has become world-wide reality and the primary
solution in the industry is to deploy IPv6-only networking. Meanwhile,
having access to legacy IPv4 contents and services is a long-term
- requirement, will be so until the completion of the IPv6 transition. It
+ requirement, and will be so until the completion of the IPv6 transition. It
demands sharing residual IPv4 address pools for IPv4 communications
across the IPv6-only domain(s).
@@ -187,28 +187,24 @@
Residual deployment with MAP is new to most operators. This document
is motivated to provide basic understanding on the usage of MAP, i.e.,
- when and how an operator can do with MAP to meet its own operational
- requirements of IPv6 transition and its facility conditions, in the
- phase of IPv4 residual deployment. Potential readers of this document
+ when and how an operator can deploy MAP to meet its own operational
+ requirements for IPv6 transition given its facility conditions, during the
+ IPv4 residual deployment phase. Potential readers of this document
are those who want to know:
- What are the requirements of MAP deployment ?
+ What are the requirements of MAP deployment?
- What technical options needs to be considered when deploying MAP,
- and how?
+ What technical options need to be considered when deploying MAP,
+ and how can they be applied?
How does MAP impact on the address planning for both IPv6 and
IPv4 pools?
How does MAP impact on daily network operations and
- administrations?
+ administration?
- How do we migrate to IPv6-only network with the help of MAP?
+ How do we migrate to an IPv6-only network with the help of MAP?
- Terminology of this document, unless it is intentionally specified,
- follows the definitions and abbreviations of .
-
Unless it is specifically specified, the deployment
considerations and guidance proposed in this document are also applied to
MAP-T , the translation
@@ -235,29 +231,51 @@
-
+
+
+ The terminology of this document, unless otherwise specified,
+ follows the definitions and abbreviations of . In particular, this document uses
+ the following terms and abbreviations:
+
+ MAP Customer Edge.
+ MAP Border Relay.
+ Basic Mapping Rule.
+ Forwarding Mapping Rule.
+ Port set identifier.
+ Embedded Address (bits).
+
+ In addition, the term "End-user IPv6 prefix" is used as defined in that
+ document.
+
+
+
+
MAP can be deployed for large-scale carrier networks.
There are typically two network models for broadband access service:
- one is to use PPPoE/PPPoA authentication method while the other is to use IPoE.
- The first one is usually applied to Residential network and SOHO networks.
- Subscribers in CPNs can access broadband network by PPP dial-up authentication.
- BRAS is the key network element which takes full responsibility of IP address
- assignment, user authentication, traffic aggregation, PPP session termination,
- etc. Then IP traffic is forwarded to Core Routers through Metro Area Network,
- and finally transited to Internet via Backbone network. The second network
- scenario is usually applied to large enterprise networks. Subscribers in CPNs
- can access broadband network by IPoE authentication. IP address is normally
- assigned by DHCP server, or static configuration.
-In either case, a CPE could obtain a prefix via prefix delegation procedure,
- and the hosts behind CPE would get its own IPv6 addresses within the prefix
- through SLAAC or DHCPv6 statefully. A MAP CE would also obtain a set of MAP
- rules from DHCPv6 server.
+ one is to use the PPP over Ethernet or ATM authentication method while the
+ other is to use IP over Ethernet (IPoE) [reference?]. PPP is usually applied to residential and
+ small office, home office (SOHO) networks. Subscribers in customer networks
+ can access the broadband network by PPP dial-up authentication.
+ The Broadband Remote Access Server (BRAS) is a key network element that
+ takes full responsibility for IP address assignment, user authentication,
+ traffic aggregation, PPP session termination, etc. Subsequent IP traffic
+ is forwarded to Core Routers through a Metro Area Network,
+ and finally transited to the Internet via the Backbone network.
+
+ The second network
+ scenario is usually applied to large enterprise networks. Subscribers in these customer networkss
+ can access the broadband network by IPoE authentication. The IP address is normally
+ assigned by DHCP server, or by static configuration.
+
+ In either case, a CPE could obtain a prefix via the prefix delegation procedure.
+ A CPE that is a MAP CE would also obtain a set of MAP
+ rules from DHCPv6 server. The hosts behind the CPE would get their own IPv6 addresses
+ within the delegated prefix through Stateless Address Autoconfiguration (SLAAC) or stateful DHCPv6.
depicts a generic model of stateless IPv4-over-IPv6
communication for broadband access services.