From a85081d1a8783efe2ab1dfe65994ca08abb64e93 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chad Whitacre <chadwhitacre@sentry.io>
Date: Thu, 19 Sep 2024 16:15:20 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Address Dan's feedback

---
 src/pages/faq.astro | 11 ++++++-----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/pages/faq.astro b/src/pages/faq.astro
index dede9c5..1c527ea 100644
--- a/src/pages/faq.astro
+++ b/src/pages/faq.astro
@@ -88,10 +88,11 @@ const seoMetaData = {
                 href="https://opensource.org/"
                 class="empahsized"
                 target="_BLANK">Open Source</a
-              > to developers as companies are comfortable giving, while reserving
-              and asserting a minimal set of exclusive rights to help achieve a sustainable
-              business model. Consequently, Fair Source and Open Source are complementary
-              approaches suited to different cases:
+              > as our companies are comfortable giving, while reserving
+              and asserting a minimal set of exclusive rights to help us
+              achieve a sustainable business model. We see Fair Source and
+              Open Source as complementary approaches suited to different
+              cases:
             </p>
             <div class="w-full flex flex-wrap py-[3rem] items-stretch">
               <div class="w-12/12 lg:w-1/2 pb-[2rem] lg:pr-[0.75rem]">
@@ -278,7 +279,7 @@ const seoMetaData = {
           </div>
         </Collapse>
         <Collapse
-          title="Is Fair Source software safe to use?"
+          title="Are Fair Source licenses safe for developers?"
           collapseID="is-fair-source-safe"
         >
           <div class="relative flex flex-wrap pb-[3rem]">