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Author: RickiHeicklen

unparalleled-misalignments.html

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 			<h3>What is happening here?</h3>
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-				This is a list of Unparalleled Misalignments, pairs of non-synonymous phrases where the words in one phrase are each synonyms of the words in the other.
+				This is a list of Unparalleled Misalignments, pairs of non-synonymous phrases where the words in one phrase are each synonyms of the words in the other. I've maintained this list since 2018; attributions (when known) can be seen on hover.
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-				I've maintained this list since 2018; attributions to other contributors (when known) can be seen by hovering over the Unparalleled Misalignment in question. You, too, can have the dubious privilege of improving this list via <a href="https://forms.gle/jKrpMbqwFKuGtN2KA">this form</a>.
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+				You, too, can have the dubious privilege of improving this list via <a href="https://forms.gle/jKrpMbqwFKuGtN2KA">this form</a>.
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 			<h3>Who are you and why are you doing this to me?</h3>
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-				I enjoy word games. This fall I'm organizing <a href="https://metagame.games" target="_blank">Metagame</a>, a conference about word games, board games, video games, and puzzles. More generally, I run Arbor, a team of people curious about markets, pedagogy, and game design. We run a games-based <a href="https://www.trading.camp" target="_blank">trading bootcamp</a>, a pedagogy incubator for other bootcamps, and some weird auction-based parties.</p>
+				I enjoy wordplay. This fall I'm organizing <a href="https://metagame.games" target="_blank">Metagame</a>, a conference about word games, board games, video games, and puzzles. More generally, I run Arbor, a team of people curious about markets, pedagogy, and game design. We run a games-based <a href="https://www.trading.camp" target="_blank">trading bootcamp</a>, a pedagogy incubator for other promising bootcamps, and some weird auction-based parties.</p>
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